Thursday, April 20, 2017

Passive Vs Active Voice

It is important to write in an active voice when writing academically because it makes the writing sound more assertive.
How to discern

  • underline the subject
  • if the subject is the one that is actually doing the action then it is active
  • ex: The dog attacked the girl.
  • If the subject is receiving the verb it is passive (tip: look for by, often passive if contains by)
  • ex: The girl was attacked by the dog.

Monday, March 6, 2017

research paper notes


  • topic sentence needs to be clear concise and compelling
  • 3rd person
  • use vocab
  • answer why
  • no dancing around ur point
  • no stuff or things
  • concrete detail
  • intro and show cred
  • mla intext
  • can be paraphrased summarized or chat/img
  • commentary
  • 2-3 sentences explanation
  • not restating analyzing/explaining
  • 2 cd
  • 2 cm
  • conclusion wrap up by restaing points transition to next paragraphs.